Monday, January 18, 2010

Haiku


Dark sky with bright light
take care of silent world
enjoy quite forest






Two planet in space
fill the sky with theirbeauty
draw fantasy world

Blue sky with red cloud
cover Garden of Eden
wait his arrival


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  1. Miss. Rochelle SaylerJanuary 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM

    Really liked the last haiku! The first haiku has some syllable problems. Also, I didn't see 5 total, only 3.

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